Change in Plot/Script

Unfortunately, I was unable to obtain the military general's military fatigue outfit for the General Adil character. After trying to find various solutions, I finally realized that he was not a necessary character for the opening of the film. With this realization, I consulted with my partner and we agreed that we can get rid of the character all together and just adjust the script accordingly. We also had to change the script because after review we realized that we were way to ambitious and creative. We aren't able to pull of most of the things in the original script.

New Script:

Setting - A facility in a dark forest far from civilization

Fade in from black

Title: Titan

Scientific Facility - Nighttime

A modern building surrounded by woods.

Facility - Experimentation Room - Nighttime

Scientists wearing white lab coats work on their computers in a dimly lit room. Complex information is shown on the monitors. In the center of the room a tank is placed with some unknown substance inside.

Dr. Nathaniel inputs instructions into a laptop connected to the tank. He hands are shaking with nervous anticipation. His expression looks worried yet interested.

Dr. Paul standing behind Dr. Nathaniel, monitors the tank.

Dr. Paul: (uneasy) Are you sure this is safe? The creature, it's changing extremely rapidly.

Dr. Nathaniel: (confident) It's what we signed up for, Paul. We engineered it. We control it.

A loud growl is heard throughout the facility, sounding animalistic yet unnatural. The growl is so powerful that it interferes with the facilities lights.

Dr. Nathaniel: (stiffening) That... that can't be good.

Inside the tank, the creature starts to go wild. It throws its massive body against the tank's walls. The tank shakes violently.

Dr. Nathaniel: (shocked) it's awake

The tank begins to crack from the power of the creature's roars.

Dr. Nathaniel: Lock it down! LOCK IT DOWN NOW!!!

Dr. Nathaniel trips due to the fear he feels

Alarms and bright flashing red lights start to go off, further increasing the panic in the room. The creature breaks out of the tank.

(this point on is shown from the monsters point of view)

The monster grows at an insane rate, towering over Dr. Nathaniel.

The monster attacks Dr. Nathaniel and Dr. Paul runs away.

The monster chases after Dr. Paul and lunges towards him

Cut to black with screaming in the background.